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June 22, 2012
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This is the task for this assignment: [link]

For :icongakuen-manga:

Pretty simple. I think I need to loosen up a bit...^^; What do you guys think? (Note: Okay, I was drawing a circle...and felt the urge to draw a face in it, kay? DON'T JUDGE ME!)

Art (c) SteeKira
Assignment (c) Gakuen-Manga

Please don't use without either of our permission.

Materials: 0.3mm Mechanical pencil
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:iconmizz-izzy:
~mizz-izzy Jun 22, 2012
It looks good! You sure did a lot of lines. :D The only thing I notice is some of your lines seem just a bit messy.
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*SteeKira Jun 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you! And yes, XD I'll take that into account next time.
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=Firegirln1 Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hi SteeKira! I'm Firegirln1 from Gakuen-Manga. It seems like we're both incoming freshman and we both did this traditional. Freshie's gotta stick together! haha good job on this task, i can tell you really put effort into it. Nice fanning out on the H+V lines, it looks good. My only critique is that at points the lines could be a little smoother (ex. Your long elbow lines have a bit of a point in the middle) But very good, i look forward to more :D

-Firegirln1
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*SteeKira Jun 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much for the feedback! Nice to meet you fellow traditional freshie! :D
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*Kuro-curse Jun 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Nice.
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*SteeKira Jun 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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*Kuro-curse Jun 29, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
no problem
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~Flaming-Noodle Jun 22, 2012  Student General Artist
No bad. :3 The face in the corner is cute o3o :heart:

Is it just me or are the best lines the one's at angles like '/' and '\'...? The - and l lines are really shakey. The top portion of the drawing is much cleaner than the bottom half...

Your 'pen pressure' is really good. I don't see any issues with varying the thickness of the lines and curves. With all that being said, part of this task is graded on how well the lines, curves, circles, and ovals are executed-which includes how clean they appear. And as much as I love swirls, they shouldn't be visable in or on your ovals and circles.

Good luck with the revision :3
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*SteeKira Jun 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you! Yeah, actually I hear it's easier to draw straight diagnol lines than horizantal/vertical ones. It has something to do with the motion of your wrist I think? But yeah...^^; I'll work on it. I actually found a good "cheat" for it by turning the paper sideways and try drawing lines that way. XD

Thank you! I'll be sure to take that into account as well....v.v; I might have to start over again.
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~Flaming-Noodle Jun 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Good luck ^_^V
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